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Post by AnnoyingTagAlong on Feb 14, 2004 14:24:37 GMT -5
(im back!)
Kinkei started into the cave with the others... As he went into the cave he stumbled on a rock and fell head first and starting rolling towards the back of the cave. (does the cave go straight or does it head down?) "Ahhhh!!!"he said as he rolled down into the cave.
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Post by Fool of an Eriko on Feb 14, 2004 19:40:26 GMT -5
((I'm gonna do a POV post because I feel like it.))
~*Shenjo's POV*~
The cave's ground was sloping almost sharply downward, and I rested a hand tenatively on the wall to steady myself. Just one slip could probably send me tumbling.
The aid of my flashlight was minimal, and ironically the flashing lightning illuminated the cave when thunder shook the walls. In the lead of the slow-moving group, I felt a sense of pride as well as fear.
I pointed the flashlight ahead. The path seemed to grow narrow and even more dark. The ground beneath my feet was still moist, and I cursed myself for wearing such light footwear whilst wondering if it was safe to go deeper.
Turning, I opened my mouth to ask the opinion of the others, but I couldn't get the words out. Before I said a thing, Kinkei let out a sharp cry and tumbled forward.
"A rock!" my sister cried and darted past me after the boy. He was in a ball, rolling out of control to... to wherever the cave ended. An image of sharp pointy rocks off a sudden drop made my stomach churn.
"Oh, shit," I said, and sprinted after them.
---Eriko's POV---
I'd seen him trip, and I'd tried to call out for Shenjo to catch him or something, but it didn't work. The boy fell and rolled.
"A rock!" was all I could say, and that was totally irrelevant--it was just what he'd tripped on. I ran after him, mindless of the fact that I, too, was endangering myself--I'd trip if I wasn't careful.
I heard Shenjo and the others following me. The beam of my brother's flashlight jumped around erratically as he ran; he could not hold it steady. Thus, I was basically running blindly into the darkness. Whatever! We were screwed anyway.
And that's when Kinkei's shouts became an echo.
"What the--?!" But I found out just what had happened with a startled yelp. The ground beneath my feet was suddenly not there, and like a cartoon character I blinked, feeling suspended.
And then I fell.
It was a chasm to God knows where--and I'm an athiest. I was falling, flailing my arms, and screaming. The others, above me, I heard fall as well.
For that moment, I believed in God and prayed to him that we wouldn't die.
((I think I'll do POV posts from now on. They're more fun. =P You guys can do whatever you want.))
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Post by Shuurei no Senshi on Feb 14, 2004 21:43:49 GMT -5
(("A rock!" .......XDDDDDDDDD
Ok, anyways... since my head is sorta bleh, tell me, is Reikuchi and Ryuzo still there? Or did they miss the whole thing?))
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Post by Fool of an Eriko on Feb 14, 2004 21:55:45 GMT -5
((*shrugs* They're all supposed to fall into the chasm of DOOM. So my plotline thing will work. =D So... *kicks 'em in* Hahaha.))
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Post by AnnoyingTagAlong on Feb 14, 2004 22:25:17 GMT -5
As Kinkei fell into the darkness he heard Eriko yelp as if she fell into the darkness as well. He saw light going everywhere because Shenjo wasn't holding the light still.
*Sploosh* (this was the only way i saw that anyone could survive a fall is if there was a underground water source thing)
Kinkei fell into a body of water and tryed to fight to the surface to get a breath of air from yelling.
When he got to the surface for a breath of air he heard another something fall into the water. Kinkei was hoping it was one of the others so he wouldn't be alone.
Kinkei had a creepy feeling because he has an overactive imagination. He thought maybe it was an Alien from one of the Alien movies.
He shuddered in the darkness. "Hello!?! Is anyone there!?!
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Post by .:Soleil:. on Feb 15, 2004 16:01:33 GMT -5
Ryuzo, who had been hit when Kinkei started tumbling, tumbled as well, splooshing into the water just after Kinkei surfaced, causing a slight rippling splash. he surfaced, and heard Kenkei ask if anyone was there. "Yeah, Im here....but where's everyone else? Coming, I guess."
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Post by Fool of an Eriko on Feb 18, 2004 21:39:41 GMT -5
((Dammit, there's not supposed to be water, but I'll find a way to kill it. >D))
~*Shenjo's POV*~
Crap, I hated swimming.
I crashed into the relatively shallow water with a cut-off cry and clawed my way to the surface. Somehow, I managed not to lessen my grip on the tiny flashlight, and with another somehow, it managed not to die in the water.
Suddenly, I believed in God.
The shoreline was nearby and I could see the others bobbing around as well. "It's over there," I coughed, and waded towards the shoreline with my feet that barely touched the ground.
=Eriko's POV=
With my brother's flashlight guiding the way I found my way to the water's edge and climbed out with little difficulty. Shenjo soon followed, and I helped the others out as well, coughing and spluttering and shaking with cold.
Indeed, it was extremely chilly... I myself was shivering a bit, and worried that my clothes would not dry. Such a predicament could cause rapid illness...
I shook my wet hair like a dog and looked around, gasping for breath and wiping at my eyes. I hated the fact that it was dark and we could barely see. The flashlight wasn't doing much. I wished I had magical powers that could make it brighter.
"Is everyone alright...?" I asked, looking around. "Crap... this is bad. We can't get back up."
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Post by .:Soleil:. on Feb 19, 2004 0:30:33 GMT -5
Ryuzo climbed his way up the shore, with the help of Eriko, and sat on the edge of the water, his legs still under it. "Hey it looks like there's a little tunnel here. I wonder if it comes out near a town or something? Its not too deep...think we should wade out?"
((haveing a secret plan rox0rz!))
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Post by AnnoyingTagAlong on Feb 23, 2004 19:32:23 GMT -5
"I think we should check it out. Let's go for it. I mean what else could go wrong"(evil saying that causes bad luck). Kinkei thinks his backpack is lighter(o no!) so he checks it out. "AHH!!!111exclamatission pin-oint". "The foods gone!!! CRAP!" Once he calms down he starts rushing towards the tunnel to blow off steam.
No more food ya happy?(heh)
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Post by .:Soleil:. on Feb 23, 2004 20:33:56 GMT -5
((would have lose it anyways)) "Hey now! We need light, and what if something is down there? Only one of us should go, and if it keeps going, then the come back and get the others, and if there is something there....welll.....they can yell ahead so that you guys can..hit it with a rock or something."
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Post by AnnoyingTagAlong on Feb 23, 2004 20:45:15 GMT -5
"Maybe I'll just slug the thing if it tries to attack me." What am I talking about I can't hurt a fly. He thought. "It's ok I can see pretty good, I don't need a light." "I wish my mom didn't sign that permission slip." He said to himself. "Anyways... I'll tell you if I find anything."
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Post by .:Soleil:. on Feb 23, 2004 20:48:44 GMT -5
"NO!! Someone else should go....."
He looked around and a looked a little bit embarrassed...
"Someone who is and would be completely useless."
((Hahah! Warping your fighting to make it look like you have a purpose and I dont!!! MUAHAHAHAAHHAHAAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHHAHA!!!! ((and me and devon already planned this part =P))))
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Post by Fool of an Eriko on Feb 23, 2004 22:55:18 GMT -5
~*Shenjo's POV*~
"I suppose," I said, though a bit unsure. Then I smiled, an idea dawning on me. I'm such a clever little bastard sometimes. "Thank you for volunteering, Ryuzo-kun!"
I proceeded to girly wink (^_~) and wave him towards the water.
=Eriko's POV=
A little taken aback by Shenjo's sudden enthusiasm and girly winking, I blinked. "Err, I'll go too, I guess. It'll be safer that way... so if one gets stuck, the other can help them."
I didn't mention that if we BOTH got stuck, we were BOTH screwed.
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Post by Shuurei no Senshi on Feb 24, 2004 0:25:52 GMT -5
Reikuchi ((who had been dead for quite some time XD)) looked at the scene before her. She was gonna volunteer, but I guess there's no need for that now.
The fall ((which she apparently didn't notice)) had made her blank out a few times, and she couldn't keep her focus long enough to do anything. She suddenly spoke up, "Uhm, don't you still think it'd be better if we went together? I eman, what if that one person, being Ryuzo, gets attacked by something and doesn't escape it?" She then realized that Eriko was going too.
"Oh, well ok,I guess I'll just wait here, unless you want me to do anything else..."
~*~*~*~
Grgh. Headache. Can't concentrate. Feel like me ish gonna throw up.. hk [pokdjs [j ia f[s;a hjkf lwio eyu;f h;as hufip;hu ..........
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Post by jewguyofdoom on Feb 24, 2004 3:22:56 GMT -5
((oooo im back..and my own story is my own!btw between my two chars is now...i will explain later and un ruling hate! so...yeah..and stuff...)) he stood up after all this rain had hit him like small needels agenst his skin. he looked to the burning reckage it seemed to be putting out by the rain((eh dose that make sense?)) he stood clenching his fist muttering to himslef as he headed for the cavern. befor he entered a somebody tackeled him to the ground slamming him into the mud.the figure was no onther than Maka's only freind punching him across his face over and over as the guy stood up over the now bloody limp body,his boot pressed Maka's face into the mud puching him in allmost drowning him in the combonation of water and mud only every few second he could gasp for air or yell "HELP!!" the pain from the boot only grew the bottem now slowly even cutting into Maka's face as he hit the ground, now weakly "so little air"he thought he couldnt stand for much more of this, he'd soon run out of air. and just stop moving((hope it made sence!))
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